scudtwo | Jan 19, 2025
You're absolutely right!

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Jan 24, 2025
We'll see how things go. I will say that I added the dick size choice in part two specifically because of your comment. Sure, having a bigger dick isn't the same as being taller and stronger, but it fits with the vibe of being physically superior. I was initially just going to have the younger brother have a smaller dick, making his domination of "you" feel more humiliating and crafty, but I can definitely get into the "he's just plain better than you" vibe too.

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Jul 21, 2024
Yeah, I'm not saying I've never done something with a happy ending, but it doesn't happen very often. To a large extent, I see stories as support mechanisms for bad endings. Or at the very least, the ending is the final outrage in a long series of them.

scudtwo | Jul 21, 2024
Nicely put!

heatherhills | Jan 19, 2025
Hit and run that killed a little girl. Shouldn't get a happy ending.

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Jan 24, 2025
I hadn't given in much thought, but how you judge the hit-and-run can definitely change how the story affects you. If you think the protagonist is a scumbag, it's maybe a story of just desserts. I'm personally less into that kind of thing and am generally more turned on by unfairness and exploitation. I can get into the idea of somebody deserving abuse for being a wimp, but I never entirely buy into the reasoning of that, so it still retains a sense of unwarranted cruelty (they kind of deserve it, but not really). In this story, I don't necessarily excuse the protagonist, who obviously shouldn't have driven off, but people can panic in catastrophes like this, and I more take the event in a neutral sense, as something that just happened. I'm not saying that driving off isn't a terrible thing to do, but a person who panics and does a horrible thing isn't necessarily a horrible person. At the same time, I think you're perfectly justified in thinking he deserves karmic retribution and not a happy ending. Part two may potentially have some effect on perspectives though.

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Feb 24, 2024
Why's that? You mean specifically in this last picture?

Artinthedark | Feb 24, 2024
I liked the story untill it got to the part of the people just killing them. Im sorry I just dont get the death kink

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Feb 25, 2024
Oh yeah. Obviously the story's backdrop, in particular, is pretty dark, and it isn't going to be for everyone. I think the wedding story itself is a bit more suggestive though. It talks about things and threatens things, but doesn't actually deliver on the cruelest aspects of the setting, at least not until the end, which is what I thought you maybe had a problem with. It's kind of like how the whole damsel in distress trope is often something that doesn't really explore its own more disturbing aspects. With the brain damage comment though, I think the story here actually gets a bit "real" and maybe quits feeling like it's just playing around with darkness. Nevertheless, it arguably still somewhat underdelivers on the brutality of the setting, as nobody dies, and, at least in my mind, any brain damage Michelle suffers is minor and is just there to make the cruelty and betrayal feel more substantive. But it sounds like you were turned off of the story much earlier on, and I can't say much about that other than that, while our fetishes may have some overlap, they obviously just don't align here. I don't think you can be too surprised when somebody going by SissySnuffSlutSindy gets a little dark though.

SissySnuffSlutSindy | Feb 17, 2024
Thanks! It's a statement on the dangers of rampant consumerism within our modern polycultural society. Chloe, of course, represents the parochial interests of the Fed and the stifling influence it has on economic innovation, while Michelle symbolizes a really hot dickgirl with an enormous cock. Story aside, I take full credit for downloading and subsequently uploading the sexy picture here. I'm not going to feign false modesty and pretend it wasn't an act of genius on my part. Seriously though, thanks. It took way too much time and effort to track down pictures that were at least semi-appropriate for the story (I'm starting to think it's a mistake to try to come up with pictures for a story you already have instead of the other way around) and any feedback I get goes a long way towards making the work seem worthwhile. I'm still a little disappointed I couldn't find more consistent pictures for Michelle (first she's a blonde Asian, then a raven-haired Caucasian, then a redhead?), but I can only work with what I've got, and I'm otherwise reasonably satisfied with how things turned out.

Jimmyred6666 | Feb 17, 2024
The picture choice turned me on alot...I think you can do it either way. Looking forward to more of your creations. Thx