"Oh my gosh, you are so talented at this! It took me 3sessions to finish this story. I just could not help but cum before reaching the end. In my opinion, you have a great way of hooking the reader with every image. Maybe it would make it easier to read if you broke up some of the dialogue that gets too long; sometimes the text quality even drops, making it hard to read. Sending you kisses please keep up this beautiful work!"
"Although the writing was solid, it was somewhat rough in places, seeming more like rambling than a structured narrative (mostly in the first part). And I'm not a fan of this poem / line break after comma style formatting, it's a bit jarring to read at times. It would be nice to see a standard format with proper punctuation. But the addition of color to the dialogue was a good upgrade.
Overall this whole story was a lot of fun, and it was interesting to see how Sam changed throughout it. I'm looking forward to seeing whatever you do next."
Ghosthost223| Jul 23, 2026
I appreciate the feedback! for the breaks after commas or mid sentences, it’s a formatting issue, it’s a result of me trying to fit the text into the picture, I can see why it would be jarring though. I’m still trying to find a good balance between the size of the text and filling the whole page. Thank you for reading my story!
"Let me start of by saying great work. Some of the captions couldn't be enlarged and the text was too small to read. Overall great story, great picture/gif selection. I would love more parts of Sam(my) and Mina."