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Commented 22 Jul, 2026
"Although the writing was solid, it was somewhat rough in places, seeming more like rambling than a structured narrative (mostly in the first part). And I'm not a fan of this poem / line break after comma style formatting, it's a bit jarring to read at times. It would be nice to see a standard format with proper punctuation. But the addition of color to the dialogue was a good upgrade.Overall this whole story was a lot of fun, and it was interesting to see how Sam changed throughout it. I'm looking forward to seeing whatever you do next."
Ghosthost223 | Jul 23, 2026
I appreciate the feedback! for the breaks after commas or mid sentences, it’s a formatting issue, it’s a result of me trying to fit the text into the picture, I can see why it would be jarring though. I’m still trying to find a good balance between the size of the text and filling the whole page. Thank you for reading my story! |
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Commented 21 Jul, 2026
"Good story. Hot Gifs to go with it!"
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