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This is a reworked version of the original story, which, a month ago, was flagged as being inappropriate. Some of the more starkly provocative details have been dialed back to make it less objectionable to the powers that be, though I imagine that what got it pulled in the first place was more what they thought it might contain than what it actually did (to be fair, I may have played into this with some suggestive tags). Regardless, I feel like I've maintained the original vibe and not had to sacrifice anything vital, aside from a turn of phrase here and there, which might possibly rob those moments of a little bite, but shouldn't impact the overall story. It really shouldn't feel wanting to anybody, or at least I don't think so, but if it was flagged on the basis of extreme language (rather than fears over what it might contain), I should really think that has been adequately addressed.
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