Just started reading your new story on "The Plague", and as someone who isn't a fan of a majority of interracial content on her I find it interesting. I think I would enjoy it more if there was more mention of how the women were affected throughout all races, and as to why exactly all the white men almost instantly became subservient. (I would think some angry white guy would have a gun or something) Not to mention the matters of free will and all, things that a liberal state like California would likely be all over. I doubt they would end up with such a heavily separated caste system. I understand you're looking for an extreme angle, something to shock and excite the reader, but at some point I would expect to see a hero rise to fight for the "sissy" populous' rights. be it inside or outside the QZ. It really does get a bit out of hand with how far things go without some sort of interference from federal government. (This is a sanctioned state of America after all. They would have to abide by federal law if to continue as such without repercussion.) Those few things aside its an interesting read, I'll have to check out some of your other stories.
I apologize if you weren't looking for a critic, but I felt I had to express my thoughts as I liked the writing and concept enough to give it a chance.
Shagster1| Jan 13, 2015
You raise some interesting points and if I had been writing a book they would all have been valid ones, the virus itself was an engineered one so effects those at a DNA level, the females and other races the virus was fatal, and with who was left it effected the chemical balances in the body which does effect behaviour in everyone, my stories just deal with the aftermath of the virus, during the virus uprisings and such i would expect to be commonplace as well as a great deal of measures in dealing with the dead and dying, as for the government response would have to quaranteen and burn the entire region to stop a world wide pandemic my soultion to quaranteen and seal the area probably wouldn't occur.
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