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    Another story i am working on, this is the ending :)

    Jason:- "What can I say, through everything we have been through, through everything that we have done I guess in the end I still love you"

    Alice:- "But..But..I don't love you anymore"

    Jason:- "I know you don't but I will always love you, I guess it just took a little while for me to realise how I truly felt"

    Alice:- "But in that short amount of time you spent trying to realise the obvious I moved on, I guess now i'm much happier without you in my life"

    Jason:- "Okay, well I know I messed up big time, if you want me out of your life for good all's you have to do is tell me and I promise you, not one of those promises I make then break pretty quick, an actual promise I will keep no matter what, I will walk away, I will never look back and I will just leave you be for the rest of your life"

    Alice:- "Jason although I once loved you, although once upon a time I couldn't see my life without you, I guess at this moment in time I am going to ask you take the promise you offered and leave my life, I am sorry but like I said, my life is much better without you in it now"

    With nothing else left to say Jason turned away from Alice, the last piece of his heart became nothing but a soon to be forgotten memory, he had officially messed up his life from that point on, Alice was the only friend he had ever had, she had stuck with him through the good parts and the bad parts of his life, she never had once even been tempted to leave, she always seemed to be the one person who could make the world seem so perfect even in the darkest moments and now she was gone, she would soon become a memory like the few other great things that life had once sent his way, now all's he had were the clothes on his back and the few items he had managed to salvage over the years, he took one step away before turning back to see Alice walking away, he knew he had one last chance to stop her

    Jason:- "Alice wait, I want to say..Never mind, I guess i'll just say goodbye"

    He couldn't find the right words to make her stay, he knew in the end she was better off in the life she would get to live without him, he knew without him in her life she would be able to live the life that she so truly deserved

    Alice:- "Goodbye Jason, take care of yourself"

    Jason:- "And you, good luck in your new old life"

    With all said and done they both walked their seperate ways, Jason went back to the streets where he had been living for the best part of five years while Alice finally did the one thing she should have done all those years ago, she returned home, now every once in a while she would stare out of her window at night and would see Jason walking past her house searching for a new place to sleep, on the rare occasion she would do something a little helpfull and leave the back gate open aswell as the shed unlocked just so Jason had a safe place to sleep for one night, guess that was always her way of thanking him for all the things he did for her.

     
      Posted on : Sep 2, 2012
     

     
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    TheDarkestSpir
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    Commented on Sep 8, 2012
    There is always little conflict in my storys, for a first time writer my storys are bound to be a little off, parts are bound to be missing, i know dialogue in my case is little and pretty poor but i do hope that my story atleast makes someone say..wow that was good
     
    Big_Mikki
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    Commented on Sep 7, 2012
    Conflict creates tension and I often think character play is best done through dialogue a bit like Shakespeare, where dialogue is used to create the tension.
     
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    Commented on Sep 7, 2012
    Conflict creates tension and I often think character play is best done through dialogue a bit like Shakespeare, where dialogue is used to create the tension.
     
    TheDarkestSpir
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    Commented on Sep 3, 2012
    I know it's a little different but i do always have my plans with storys, i will make it better
     
    Big_Mikki
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    Comments: 124
    Commented on Sep 2, 2012
    Interesting lol
     




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